*Introduction
I will start by describing the current sate that many people use social network to communicate with others. also introduce about the function of social network service. And then start to mention about the problems of social network service, and some affect that will lead to.(loneliness)
*Narration
I will summarize the research I've done and provide some explanations for prove the social network makes people lonely. Also I will give some expert's opinion to help readers understand why the SNS makes people lonely.
*Confirmation
I will do some question investigation in our school to prove the SNS really makes us feel lonely, and then ask them why they think so. In addition I want to collect some evidences from expert's experimentation that test between SNS user and nonuser's difference of loneliness they feel.
*Refutation and concession
I will mention about the a social misfit through the internet communicate with others. They can't communicate with others in real world, so they use internet to interact with the world. For this reason, some may say that the SNS does not makes people lonely, inversely it help the lonely person make friends.but everybody already known that the internet friends is not same with real. I will use these type of people to make my topic stronger.
*Summation
I will close with a summary of my previous points, and give some advice to solve the problem. And then Also I want to coment some criticism about our contemporary society that produce so many lonely person, maybe the SNS just is a product of lonely society.
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