2014년 9월 25일 목요일

Week 6 : The Instroduction

*Introduction
  I will start by describing the current sate that many people use social network to communicate with others. also introduce about the function of social network service. And then start to mention about the problems of social network service, and some affect that will lead to.(loneliness)


1. Attract the audience.
  Today a lot of people use internet. The internet became much familiar, so the internet users are on the increase. People through the internet communicate with social world and friends, search information which you want to konw, argue your oppinion on the government homepage, more over you can listen music which is recorded yesterday. We never imagine before. The internet makes the world become more faster and  closer. But didn't you ever thought about the defect of internet?


2. Explain the topic
  The SNS is the key point of internet communication.Especially for young people, the SNS is the best method to communicate with friends. We can updating our recent life on Facebook let our friends know, also can write criticism about government then posting on our own blogge to show our interest in politics.


3. Declare your thesis
  These SNS seem to make people more interactive. but actually, SNS makes people lonely.  

댓글 없음:

댓글 쓰기