*Narration
I will summarize the research I've done and provide some explanations for prove the social network makes people lonely. Also I will give some expert's opinion to help readers understand why the SNS makes people lonely.
1. What do people already know about my topic?
People konw that through SNS we can communicate with others who live far apart from us .
Today, the user of SNS are more than before.
Currently, the SNS addicts are increased.
People who feel lonely are more tend to be addicted to SNS.
2. What research has already been done about my topic?
Example of new employee,
Germany's experiment
study evidence-IAT
functions of sns
how many people use sns
sns's defect
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shows that the SNS makes people become lonely.
3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)
People after read my argument, those lonely person will find something else to treat loneliness, rather than addicted in SNS.
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