2014년 10월 24일 금요일

Week 10 : Conclusion

My Conclusion 1
I had show you guys why the SNS makes people feel lonely. Today most people use SNS. People konw that through SNS we can connect with others who live far apart from us. As one statistic showed that 74% of people who use internet use SNS, also all cell phone user's 40% people use SNS. Like this many people in contemporary society use SNS. Today, the user of SNS are more than before.  Currently, the SNS addicts are increased. Also,  the lonely person is increasing. SNS makes people lonely. Reasons, the SNS makes people compare with others and false information confuse people and failed communication makes people more lonely. I hope people after read my argument, those lonely person will find something else to treat loneliness, rather than addicted in SNS. 


My Conclusion 2
47% of American adults used social networking sites like Facebook, MySpace, Twitter, LinkedIn, and Classmates.com in 2011, up from 26% in 2008. As the user of social network service increased, the people who feel lonely are also increased. The SNS do promote interaction with friends and family, but at the same time it promote conparison among friends, too. Also it can not named "communication" . because it is failed communication. although we can disseminate useful information rapidly, but on the SNS  also have a lot of false information which confuse people. Many people connect SNS when they feel boredom or lonely. But it is not a good idea to solve loneliness. We have to know that the SNS makes people more lonely. I hope people after read my argument, those lonely person will find something else to treat loneliness, rather than addicted in SNS. 

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