Week 11 : Self Evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

I think I can receive 2 points. Although my first draft is not perfect yet, but I can developing it through second and final drafts, and it was a good start to an effective persuasive essay.

2) What did you do well?

I did well on finding reasons. I found reasons of my topic (SNS makes people feel lonely) at varies points of view. 

3) What could you have done better?

I will developing my narration parts, make it more detail. Also I will complement my essay more convincingly.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

I think my introduction is best part of my essay. My topic is unique and interesting, also I use skill that ask question to readers to make them wondering my topic. 

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

My narration is very poor. I failed to support my argument convincingly also it lack of detail.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? 

I will make my narration strongly. I will making a good job explaining the foundations of the issue.